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TITLE OF WORK REVIEWED: Exxtra CreditUSERNAME:SuckitupCOMMENTS: I agree with OnFiyah, anything involving Roman certainly gets my vote for being awesome, and if you add in the Vster well I'm sold. I think it could be a smidge more awesome for reals, BUT the pairing makes me smile.
TITLE OF WORK REVIEWED: Hot lesbian love!USERNAME: OnFiyahCOMMENTS:Okay, so look at the title of this piece. Look at my profile and favorites list. What do you think I'm gonna say?Talk about some good publicity for Sabela. One quibble, though... how's Taras gotten her arm to twist like that? Not that I wouldn't contort myself to get into Sab's panties, but that's beyond the pale. Then again, I don't care. Downloading this. Thanks.
TITLE OF WORK REVIEWED: Hot lesbian love!USERNAME: Ju!cyFr00tCOMMENTS: Hot, rly hot!!!! :heart:
TITLE OF WORK REVIEWED: Exxtra CreditUSERNAME: AutopilotOnCOMMENTS: I shan't be outdone by OnFiyah. [2/5] for teh sexy: "Mixed feelings. There was so much delicious tension at the beginning and anticipation-building cooldown at the end. I almost forgot it was run-of-the-mill Pilot-dom fanfic. Then I got to what looked like a copypaste of someone else's poorly-written sex scene. Shoulda just faded to black."[4/5] for realism: "Starts out smooth, ends smoother - the devil's in the details, and you definitely have the little things down. The tongue stud, Roman's shaving regimen ... trust me when I say this is a well-informed piece. Minus one for having the entire thing last a single cigarette. That bothered me. They'd take their time, if it happened."[3/5] for writing skill: "Pretty good near the beginning. But I have to agree with OnFiyah here, not only was it a 'member', it was a 'throbbing member.' Dealbreaker. Can't get above a three with that one."[3/5] overall: "You got my hopes up, then you ruined the sex scene. That's like going for dinner and a movie, and really connecting over the meal, but then the movie's absolute shit and your date disappears halfway through. I absolutely hated it - where do you come up with the image of a "mottled purple throbbing member" anyway? Don't try to author erotica again - it's not worth tarnishing your otherwise reasonable promise as a fiction writer."_________________I am a harsh reviewer.[5] Delicious. Moar.[4] Worth reading if you haven't.[3] You didn't miss much if you didn't.[2] Miserable, actively avoid.[1] DO NOT WANT.
TITLE OF WORK REVIEWED: Exxtra CreditUSERNAME: OnFiyahCOMMENTS: "You got my hopes up, then you ruined the sex scene. That's like going for dinner and a movie, and really connecting over the meal, but then the movie's absolute shit and your date disappears halfway through."Or it's like going on a date and then the sex is bad. Y'know.
TITLE OF WORK REVIEWED: Exxtra CreditUSERNAME: AutopilotOnCOMMENTS: I prefer my metaphors conveniently detached from the subject matter.