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USERNAME: Rhys2COMMENTS: You're all losers. And you! Rhys! STOP USING MY DAMN NAME. I KNOW WHO YOU ARE.
Quote from: "Alaina"USERNAME: AutopilotOnCOMMENTS: This looks trollish. I can tell from the ad hominem and from having seen a great many trolls in my lifetime. Actually, you're all wrong - even you, Bubbles. Because this is the VCN and nobody verifies the truth of statements, I can safely say this.I am the only person in this conversation who's better than the average bored reader.The only person who'd be better than me would be a writer who can produce five-star work. Conveniently, I have chosen to never give out a 5cr rating.USERNAME: OnFiyahCOMMENTS: Full of yourself, aren'tcha? And I don't mind the insults, I know my fic is beautiful because it's true. Anyway, as one who appreciates subtext a wee bit more than anyone who can't understand me... write your own! Ooh, I bet it's good. I bet you write scalefic.
USERNAME: AutopilotOnCOMMENTS: This looks trollish. I can tell from the ad hominem and from having seen a great many trolls in my lifetime. Actually, you're all wrong - even you, Bubbles. Because this is the VCN and nobody verifies the truth of statements, I can safely say this.I am the only person in this conversation who's better than the average bored reader.The only person who'd be better than me would be a writer who can produce five-star work. Conveniently, I have chosen to never give out a 5cr rating.
Quote from: "OnFiyah"USERNAME: OnFiyahCOMMENTS: Full of yourself, aren'tcha? And I don't mind the insults, I know my fic is beautiful because it's true. :D Anyway, as one who appreciates subtext a wee bit more than anyone who can't understand me... write your own! Ooh, I bet it's good. I bet you write scalefic.USERNAME: AutopilotOnCOMMENTS: I do not!
USERNAME: OnFiyahCOMMENTS: Full of yourself, aren'tcha? And I don't mind the insults, I know my fic is beautiful because it's true. :D Anyway, as one who appreciates subtext a wee bit more than anyone who can't understand me... write your own! Ooh, I bet it's good. I bet you write scalefic.
USERNAME: OnFiyahCOMMENTS: Full of yourself, aren'tcha? And I don't mind the insults, I know my fic is beautiful because it's true. Anyway, as one who appreciates subtext a wee bit more than anyone who can't understand me... write your own! Ooh, I bet it's good. I bet you write scalefic.
USERNAME: BubblesGoPopCOMMENTS: ...What's an ad hominem? ...Yeah I don't really get anything you just said. ^^;
TITLE OF WORK REVIEWED: Young and Green. And Hot.USERNAME: Ju!cyFr00tCOMMENTS: Its like, half a story. Da pairing is good tho!! U gonna continue??
TITLE OF WORK REVIEWED: My White Knight Chapter 1USERNAME: Ju!cyFr00tCOMMENTS: Aaaaw so so so so so cute!!! I never imagened The Citizen guy bing hot, but I can c it here!!! Alaric/anybody is my total fav!!! :heart:
Quote from: "Charlemangel"QuoteTITLE OF WORK REVIEWED: Young and Green. And Hot.USERNAME: Ju!cyFr00tCOMMENTS: Its like, half a story. Da pairing is good tho!! U gonna continue??USERNAME: OnFiyahCOMMENTS: I don't know, man, I was in a slightly altered state when I wrote that... don't judge. Lest ye. Fabela is mad hot, though, no lie.
QuoteTITLE OF WORK REVIEWED: Young and Green. And Hot.USERNAME: Ju!cyFr00tCOMMENTS: Its like, half a story. Da pairing is good tho!! U gonna continue??
Quote from: "ZombieCzarina"QuoteTITLE OF WORK REVIEWED: My White Knight Chapter 1USERNAME: Ju!cyFr00tCOMMENTS: Aaaaw so so so so so cute!!! I never imagened The Citizen guy bing hot, but I can c it here!!! Alaric/anybody is my total fav!!! :heart: USERNAME: RhysCOMMENTS: 8D Yay! I'm so glad you like it. Though I am way more into the Alesku side of the pairing. Like, so hot. The man is /electric./USERNAME: OnFiyahCOMMENTS: Seriously, enough electricity puns, we get it. He is hot, though.. I hear he does it with his Candidates.
QuoteTITLE OF WORK REVIEWED: My White Knight Chapter 1USERNAME: Ju!cyFr00tCOMMENTS: Aaaaw so so so so so cute!!! I never imagened The Citizen guy bing hot, but I can c it here!!! Alaric/anybody is my total fav!!! :heart: USERNAME: RhysCOMMENTS: 8D Yay! I'm so glad you like it. Though I am way more into the Alesku side of the pairing. Like, so hot. The man is /electric./
Quote from: "OnFiyah"USERNAME: OnFiyahCOMMENTS: Seriously, enough electricity puns, we get it. He is hot, though.. I hear he does it with his Candidates. USERNAME: AutopilotOnCOMMENTS: Really now? This is relevant to my interests.
USERNAME: OnFiyahCOMMENTS: Seriously, enough electricity puns, we get it. He is hot, though.. I hear he does it with his Candidates.
Quote from: "Alaina"QuoteQuote from: "OnFiyah"USERNAME: OnFiyahCOMMENTS: Seriously, enough electricity puns, we get it. He is hot, though.. I hear he does it with his Candidates. USERNAME: AutopilotOnCOMMENTS: Really now? This is relevant to my interests.USERNAME: OnFiyahCOMMENTS: Is this... oh, no, you want Alesku, don't you... but that was vile calumny; Alesku is ever so proper, the only Candidate he's done it with has been Sulo, Or So I Hear. Mm, Aliv.
QuoteQuote from: "OnFiyah"USERNAME: OnFiyahCOMMENTS: Seriously, enough electricity puns, we get it. He is hot, though.. I hear he does it with his Candidates. USERNAME: AutopilotOnCOMMENTS: Really now? This is relevant to my interests.
Quote from: "OnFiyah"USERNAME: OnFiyahCOMMENTS: Is this... oh, no, you want Alesku, don't you... but that was vile calumny; Alesku is ever so proper, the only Candidate he's done it with has been Sulo, Or So I Hear. Mm, Aliv.USERNAME: AutopilotOnCOMMENTS: Actually, I just wanted to find out if he'd been with Sulo. Thanks for the tip.
USERNAME: OnFiyahCOMMENTS: Is this... oh, no, you want Alesku, don't you... but that was vile calumny; Alesku is ever so proper, the only Candidate he's done it with has been Sulo, Or So I Hear. Mm, Aliv.
QuoteQuote from: "Ju!cyFr00t"QuoteTITLE OF WORK REVIEWED: Young and Green. And Hot.USERNAME: Ju!cyFr00tCOMMENTS: Its like, half a story. Da pairing is good tho!! U gonna continue??USERNAME: OnFiyahCOMMENTS: I don't know, man, I was in a slightly altered state when I wrote that... don't judge. Lest ye. Fabela is mad hot, though, no lie.
Quote from: "Ju!cyFr00t"QuoteTITLE OF WORK REVIEWED: Young and Green. And Hot.USERNAME: Ju!cyFr00tCOMMENTS: Its like, half a story. Da pairing is good tho!! U gonna continue??USERNAME: OnFiyahCOMMENTS: I don't know, man, I was in a slightly altered state when I wrote that... don't judge. Lest ye. Fabela is mad hot, though, no lie.
TITLE OF WORK REVIEWED: My White Knight chapter 2USERNAME: Ju!cyFr00tCOMMENTS: More Rhys!!! Plz plz plz its sooooo good!!
TITLE OF WORK REVIEWED: My White Knight chapter 2USERNAME: ReskuFan13COMMENTS:OMFG Rhy are u a P1L07 candidate? and u dont even know Alaric blushes @#$%ing BLUE not PINK omfghe'ssohot. but also, like, he had a mentor. imean I ship Remi/Resku sometimes but u could at least mention it so likeyeah do your reasearch. but the story is way hot so keep going with that yeah. but where is teh sex? its all like alesku blushed and alaric blushed and yeah okay we all like the cute blushing because they're all shy and stuff and alesku is way too serious but alaric is way more fun i mean youve seen picures of him out with gabe and <3 omg you could also do like Gabe/Resku or w/e and so yeah. Also the writing is really good. The descrptions good even though its RONG. But keep going I want to see the sex already kthx. <3 <3
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TITLE OF WORK REVIEWED: Exxtra CreditUSERNAME: Rmnlvr4lyfCOMMENTS: YUCK! Rmn would nvr do that 2 dat ltl IF boy. he's nt hawt enuff for rmn! ROMAN/ME 4EVR. gud wrtin' bad pairing!
TITLE OF WORK REVIEWED: Exxtra CreditUSERNAME: OnFiyahCOMMENTS: Hm. The tone of this story demands an AutoPilotOn-variant critique. I'm in ur FANcentral, copying u.5 lead pipes for teh Roman. Because let's face it, he's badass. I love lech!Roman. Needs more of him beating people with heavy objects, though, to be totally realistic.1 banana for use of the word 'member,' because, seriously. Not Sexy. No biscuit.3 cigarettes for the realism. It's pretty realistic.4 pipes for the writing. I like this version of Vaughan, he's so cute and cheery.2 licorice sticks because I love licorice and wanted to give you some. Here, have it. Okay, let's face it, this is an extremely realistic fic. It is a slice of life. Roman would totally do Vaughan; Vaughan is spunky and cute, if probably not as shallow as he is portrayed in this light-hearted romp through the land of cheesy softcore. Never, ever, ever use 'tumescent' in that context. Also, I do not think that 'palaver' means what you think it means. Okay, so I'm not actually sure 'mottled purple' wasn't slightly meta, but it's definitely very disturbing. You know, I need to go lie down and never think about Roman's pants again.That said, the characters are pretty good. And while they may seem flat as cardboard, it's obviously thinly veiled depth. I'm betting you're a Seeker checking out tapes of Roman's office. This totally happened, didn't it? Do you need counseling?Anyway, I like the tongue-in-cuff tone of this piece, speaking of mixed metaphors (you like those, don't you?). Witty without resorting to total crack *cough* and, actually, just a little sexy when you weren't busy empurpling the English language. Mm. Tongues in cuffs. _______I am not a strict critic.My scale runs from 1 banana to 5 lead pipes.[li]1 banana: conventional, probably purple, maybe throbbing. See a qualified physician and stop sucking.[/li][li]2 sticks of licorice: less conventional, something I can actually swallow.[/color][/li][li]3 cigarettes: hot, but still bad for you.[/li][li]4 pipes: off the beaten track, quirky, looks good in the corner of your mouth.[/li][li]5 lead pipes: well, wang me over the head and call me Harvey. [/li][/list]