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TITLE OF WORK REVIEWED: Young and Green. And Hot.USERNAME: LilLightBulbCOMMENTS: I'm not sure if I'm entertained or afraid. It was... Interesting to read. Made me choke/laugh in a few spots. Good job, OnFiyah. I think.
REVIEW TEMPLATETITLE OF WORK REVIEWED:Young and Green. And Hot.USERNAME: BurninFlmeCOMMENTS:Hey, boy, this aint a place for wet dreams. But other than that, thats a /hot/ story. Too bad that aint never going to happen. Peace out.
REVIEW TEMPLATETITLE OF WORK REVIEWED: Young and Green. And Hot.USERNAME: 1337 N1NJ4COMMENTS: Honest question: are you on crack?'Cuz srsly. MAJOR DNW....EWW.And EWWWW to the reviewers up there! WTF! It's SABELA.And FALA.And mentioned MARSHAL.EW. Least sexy thing I've ever read, bb. |: Stop trying plz. Unless Sabela eats a baby and Fala shoots her. Then I'll read moar.
REVIEW TEMPLATETITLE OF WORK REVIEWED: Young and Green. And Hot.USERNAME: BubblesGoPopCOMMENTS: Um. I don't get it. Like, these two are pilots? I thought pilots were like... I dunno, had more exciting things to do. It's so not hot either. Maybe if they were both boys.
TITLE OF WORK REVIEWED: Young and Green. And Hot.USERNAME: AutopilotOnCOMMENTS: [1/5] for teh sexy: "I have read user manuals that were hotter than this. Felt relief at TBC."[3/5] for realism: "Could plausibly happen. Hey, even bad Sabela/x fanfic autoscores a 3."[1/5] for writing skill: "Devoid of literary merit. There's even a meta-sentence in there, scandalous."[1/5] overall: "I'm going to have to go with the ninja here and say 1cr. This story seems crack-induced, saved only by the hair part, which was still little more than a weak attempt to be different from all the other SaFaSappho writers out there. I never downrank for the pairing, but the singularly awkward tone of this one was painful to read. Better luck next time."_________________I am a harsh reviewer.[5] Delicious. Moar.[4] Worth reading if you haven't.[3] You didn't miss much if you didn't.[2] Miserable, actively avoid.[1] DO NOT WANT.
TITLE OF WORK REVIEWED: My White Knight Chapter 1USERNAME: AutopilotOnCOMMENTS: [3/5] for teh sexy: "It's a challenge, and White Knight might be a little overboard on the teasing. Decent, though."[5/5] for realism: "Compared to other writers who have tried to ship these two, Rhys makes it sound scarily possible."[4/5] for writing skill: "Regardless of taste, this marks the arrival of a promising fanfic author."[4/5] overall: "Four credits, and that's coming from me. Okay, so it's completely over-the-top Candidate/Pilot hermaphrodite slash. You have to try really hard to make Resku work - I mean, not a lot of people like that combo, and how do you keep the masses from downvoting out of the sheer ridiculousness of it all? The trick's in the details (they're both so shy and adorable), and I have the suspicion Rhys has studied her subject material a little too well. Despite setting yourself up for a fall from the start, she's doing a surprisingly good job pairing two of the weirdest Pilots in the Citadel. Here's looking forward to chapter two."_________________I am a harsh reviewer.[5] Delicious. Moar.[4] Worth reading if you haven't.[3] You didn't miss much if you didn't.[2] Miserable, actively avoid.[1] DO NOT WANT.
REVIEW TEMPLATETITLE OF WORK REVIEWED: My White Knight Chapter 1USERNAME: BubblesGoPopCOMMENTS: Pilots pilots pilots... Is that all anyone has to talk about? >< It's pretty nicely written tho, like I wish I could write like that but I'm not good at writing stuff at all. Like, even if I don't care about the people its being written about, I still kinda want to read more because it looks like it could be super cute. And gosh, "Autopiloton," why d'you have a such big thing all written up? Are you like some sort of critic or something?
Quote from: "BubblesGoPop"And gosh, "Autopiloton," why d'you have a such big thing all written up? Are you like some sort of critic or something?USERNAME: AutopilotOnCOMMENTS: It's kind of a running joke, to be honest. Story of my life.
And gosh, "Autopiloton," why d'you have a such big thing all written up? Are you like some sort of critic or something?
TITLE OF WORK REVIEWED: My White Knight Chapter 1USERNAME: OnFiyahCOMMENTS: Bahahahaha. What is this, Yvonne Ironne meets The Citizen? "My door is always open"--classic. Admittedly, you got Alesku's creepy paternalism down. Man, who came up with this 'ship? The scary thing is, I could actually see it happening. You know, minus the slavishly fangirlish (fanboyish?) descriptions. I think AutoPiloton likes it a little too much, too. 4/5 indeed.
Quote from: "OnFiyah"I think AutoPiloton likes it a little too much, too. 4/5 indeed.USERNAME: AutopilotOnCOMMENTS: Do you doubt my judgements? Smite!4/5 absolutely, and full fives if we're talking hilarity value. In any case, My White Knight must have been difficult to write, and it just singlehandedly kicked the ass of every cliché femslash shower scene out there. Not namin' any names.
I think AutoPiloton likes it a little too much, too. 4/5 indeed.
[4/5] overall: "Four credits, and that's coming from me. Okay, so it's completely over-the-top Candidate/Pilot hermaphrodite slash. You have to try really hard to make Resku work - I mean, not a lot of people like that combo, and how do you keep the masses from downvoting out of the sheer ridiculousness of it all? The trick's in the details (they're both so shy and adorable), and I have the suspicion Rhys has studied her subject material a little too well. Despite setting yourself up for a fall from the start, she's doing a surprisingly good job pairing two of the weirdest Pilots in the Citadel. Here's looking forward to chapter two."
USERNAME: RhysCOMMENTS: Hey! Shut up! It was better then your stupid fic. At lease mine was good. And I like my ship. I bet those two would be so sweet. Alesku and Alaric are both shy and lonely and need love too!Tone down the jealous *humph* I can smell it through my terminal.
USERNAME: BubblesGoPopCOMMENTS: Oh get over yourselves, you're like ruining the atmosphere by being all 'I'm better' 'no I'M better' and it's like making you both look dumb. You're fighting over fanfiction. I mean like IRL that's kind of dumber than even writing fanfiction, like you're both kind of losers, haha. But I'm still reading it because I don't really have stuff to be doing so like whatever.
USERNAME: Rhys2COMMENTS: You're all losers. And you! Rhys! STOP USING MY DAMN NAME. I KNOW WHO YOU ARE.
Quote from: "Rhys2"USERNAME: Rhys2COMMENTS: You're all losers. And you! Rhys! STOP USING MY DAMN NAME. I KNOW WHO YOU ARE.USERNAME: AutopilotOnCOMMENTS: Wait, Rhys the precog Candidate? You write Resku slash? That's hilarious!
USERNAME: Rhys2COMMENTS: Gross. Hell no I don't. I'm the candidate, I don't even know what the **** Resku slash is. Can you make people change their names? I don't want MY named stained with that... Euugh.. Gross.