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Re: FANcentral.vcn
« Reply #40 on: May 25, 2009, 01:13:07 pm »
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TITLE OF WORK REVIEWED: Exxtra Credit
USERNAME:Suckitup
COMMENTS: I agree with OnFiyah, anything involving Roman certainly gets my vote for being awesome, and if you add in the Vster well I'm sold. I think it could be a smidge more awesome for reals, BUT the pairing makes me smile.
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Anonymous

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Re: FANcentral.vcn
« Reply #41 on: May 25, 2009, 01:26:51 pm »
TITLE OF WORK REVIEWED: Exxtra Credit
USERNAME: Rhys
COMMENTS: Dude! Roman is so hot! Though Jares is so much hotter then Vaughan is. Just saying. But anything with Roman gets my love!  :heart:  :heart:  :heart:  :heart:
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Anonymous

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Re: FANcentral.vcn
« Reply #42 on: June 01, 2009, 09:54:06 pm »
TITLE: Hot lesbian love!
USERNAME: hotgrls4eva!
CHARACTERS/PAIRING PORTRAYED: Sabela and Taras
IMAGE:
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Anonymous

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Re: FANcentral.vcn
« Reply #43 on: June 01, 2009, 10:50:21 pm »
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TITLE OF WORK REVIEWED: Hot lesbian love!
USERNAME:  OnFiyah
COMMENTS:

Okay, so look at the title of this piece.  Look at my profile and favorites list.  What do you think I'm gonna say?

Talk about some good publicity for Sabela.  One quibble, though... how's Taras gotten her arm to twist like that?  Not that I wouldn't contort myself to get into Sab's panties, but that's beyond the pale.  Then again, I don't care.  Downloading this.  Thanks.
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Anonymous

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Re: FANcentral.vcn
« Reply #44 on: June 01, 2009, 10:56:14 pm »
USERNAME: hotgrls4eva!
COMMENTS: She isn't twisting her arm d00d! She is just reaching behind her with her hand. The arm is just hanging down normally! Glad you like it other then that!
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Anonymous

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Re: FANcentral.vcn
« Reply #45 on: June 02, 2009, 04:58:00 am »
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TITLE OF WORK REVIEWED: Hot lesbian love!
USERNAME: Ju!cyFr00t
COMMENTS: Hot, rly hot!!!! :heart:
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Anonymous

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Re: FANcentral.vcn
« Reply #46 on: June 17, 2009, 03:31:39 pm »
TITLE: Pilot Hotness!
USERNAME: Boylovefangrl
CHARACTERS/PAIRING PORTRAYED: Liv x Loki [Warning: Incest]
IMAGE:
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a little doodle in class. soooo boring. pilots rock my socks!

oh, and they are brothers ... right? i mean they like look the same, and their names both start with L!
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Re: FANcentral.vcn
« Reply #47 on: June 29, 2009, 09:03:29 pm »
TITLE: Forbidden Love
USERNAME: LuvvAa
CHARACTERS/PAIRING PORTRAYED: Sabela Llown and Seiteki Tora
IMAGE:
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Anonymous

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Re: FANcentral.vcn
« Reply #48 on: January 09, 2010, 12:09:39 am »
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TITLE OF WORK REVIEWED: Exxtra Credit
USERNAME: AutopilotOn
COMMENTS:

I shan't be outdone by OnFiyah.

[2/5] for teh sexy: "Mixed feelings. There was so much delicious tension at the beginning and anticipation-building cooldown at the end. I almost forgot it was run-of-the-mill Pilot-dom fanfic. Then I got to what looked like a copypaste of someone else's poorly-written sex scene. Shoulda just faded to black."
[4/5] for realism: "Starts out smooth, ends smoother - the devil's in the details, and you definitely have the little things down. The tongue stud, Roman's shaving regimen ... trust me when I say this is a well-informed piece. Minus one for having the entire thing last a single cigarette. That bothered me. They'd take their time, if it happened."
[3/5] for writing skill: "Pretty good near the beginning. But I have to agree with OnFiyah here, not only was it a 'member', it was a 'throbbing member.' Dealbreaker. Can't get above a three with that one."

[3/5] overall: "You got my hopes up, then you ruined the sex scene. That's like going for dinner and a movie, and really connecting over the meal, but then the movie's absolute shit and your date disappears halfway through. I absolutely hated it - where do you come up with the image of a "mottled purple throbbing member" anyway? Don't try to author erotica again - it's not worth tarnishing your otherwise reasonable promise as a fiction writer."

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  • [5] Delicious. Moar.
  • [4] Worth reading if you haven't.
  • [3] You didn't miss much if you didn't.
  • [2] Miserable, actively avoid.
  • [1] DO NOT WANT.


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Anonymous

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Re: FANcentral.vcn
« Reply #49 on: January 09, 2010, 09:10:24 am »
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TITLE OF WORK REVIEWED: Exxtra Credit
USERNAME: OnFiyah
COMMENTS:

"You got my hopes up, then you ruined the sex scene. That's like going for dinner and a movie, and really connecting over the meal, but then the movie's absolute shit and your date disappears halfway through."

Or it's like going on a date and then the sex is bad.  Y'know.
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Anonymous

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Re: FANcentral.vcn
« Reply #50 on: January 09, 2010, 10:00:14 am »
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TITLE OF WORK REVIEWED: Exxtra Credit
USERNAME: AutopilotOn
COMMENTS:

I prefer my metaphors conveniently detached from the subject matter.

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